Road of a Blank Verse: Chapter One, The Lost

This fic was last edited Feb 8th. If you'd like to read the January 30th version of the chapter, it can be found here.

Title: Road of a Blank Verse
Summary: The world has changed, and that which went wrong has been righted. A very different gang must find one another-- and the lost Avatar-- before everything falls apart.
Author's Note: Verse is an AU fanfic, centered on a world in which Aang summoned a terrible power and returned to his past. Forever separated from his friends, Aang manages to saved his people and the rest of the world against the threat of the Fire Nation. Years pass, and Aang worries of the threats his friends will face without him-- especially the return of a pesky comet. Verse is the story of the Avatar's once friends as they try to save the world in the Avatar's absence. There are a few original characters, but the story focuses on Sokka, Katara, and Toph.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. <3
( The blizzard entered before him— winds and snow battling past, papers catching flight, the study’s bulging shelves threatening to buckle against the vicious attack.  )

IT LIVES

After cutting almost 2,500 words from Chimi, I decided to take a break and consider Verse. The first chapter is going to be tinkered with again before I post it to FFN, but I've got it up on xdfics. I give you Road of a Blank Verse. I finally just split the first chapter into two parts-- 4,000+ words is a bit much, I think, and it was a nice, natural ending where I stopped :D.

But yes, this is the story that has consumed my life. <3.

Also, new Fortress Comic, now with fun Toph cameo! Comic is going to be edited because I'm still not sure what Loni's new design like XD.Why dot I draw everyone else's characters better than my own ?

NEGAVERSE SENSHI CHAT TOMORROW YA'LL. THURSDAY FTW >D