Dude. That was awesome. Seems realistic to me - I loved the tang of bitter iron filled her and was all she could smell, it was evocative, because all I ever goddamn smell at births is a crapload of blood.
I also loved she thanked the divinity she could not name. Your language is gorgeous.
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Date: 2005-03-11 11:03 am (UTC)I also loved she thanked the divinity she could not name. Your language is gorgeous.