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Killer in Me (Draft Zero)
Killer In Me
fandom: ANCD’s Cloud Keep AU
cast: Dee, Galen (+ mention of Julian)
prompt: 31_days, “tiny little erosions”
note: This is very much in progress, and subject to change on whim. I decided to try Sage’s method of writing dialogue first, so I’ll probably be editing this a lot to get my usual flow. This isn’t dark enough for what I had initially in mind, but I like the dialogue so I’m going ahead and posting this as a draft zero. Will post another draft at some point in the future ^.^;;
She woke up in the hospital, never a good sign.
fandom: ANCD’s Cloud Keep AU
cast: Dee, Galen (+ mention of Julian)
prompt: 31_days, “tiny little erosions”
note: This is very much in progress, and subject to change on whim. I decided to try Sage’s method of writing dialogue first, so I’ll probably be editing this a lot to get my usual flow. This isn’t dark enough for what I had initially in mind, but I like the dialogue so I’m going ahead and posting this as a draft zero. Will post another draft at some point in the future ^.^;;
She woke up in the hospital, never a good sign.
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THE LINE THAT HAD ME CHOKING LAUGHING AT THE END OF A BAD DAY AT WORK. WIN AND WIN AGAIN.
I really would love to see the end of the story really ironed out. I feel the direction it is going in, but that maybe something is being incompletely said. There is a missing piece of action there, around the 'thumbs in the thigh muscle' part that seems like it would have held a lot of meaning.
Plz to finishing <3 and also CHIBI CHIBI CHIBI