I kept futzing with it last night for a few hours until I was mostly satisfied. Sage's comments helped fix the middle, I think :D.
I'm actually going to put it under the Kingdom100 prompt Inevitable, but Veteran would have been my #2 pick. This is what I get for attempting TWO fanfic100 prompt lists.At least one of them is game wide? XD
And I'm sure you'll come up with something kickarse for "Veteran" :P. I mean, all you have to do is draw Dusty in his uniform and there you go, instant winner is you XD.
I am too lazy to log into my fic account XD
I'm actually going to put it under the Kingdom100 prompt Inevitable, but Veteran would have been my #2 pick. This is what I get for attempting TWO fanfic100 prompt lists.At least one of them is game wide? XD
And I'm sure you'll come up with something kickarse for "Veteran" :P. I mean, all you have to do is draw Dusty in his uniform and there you go, instant winner is you XD.